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21st Apr 2011, 12:00 AM
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Controlling EVERYTHING
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Author Notes:
Magravan edit delete
Uhhhh... One text wall is enough, I think. Sorry for that... I hope you guys got that they were two separate scenes going concurrently... If you have a suggestion on how to do it better next time, let me know ;)

Have a great weekend!
User comments:
Silver Streak edit delete reply
Silver Streak
I think it was pretty clear :^) good job guys!
Fortunado1972 (Guest) edit delete reply
Well that answers my question Robert has control of EVERYONE! That in and of itself is pretty scary..
MatthewJA edit delete reply
Demus (Guest) edit delete reply
I have a personal theory that Robert is not only still human, he was the reason the whole thing started in the first place.


Panel 3: Obey the hypno-jiggle!
Panel 4: Blatant ass shot!
vwyler edit delete reply
Well, Robert's just a jerk, isn't he.

Hypno-jiggle... love it.
Frosty edit delete reply
Ahaha, sure Chad, suuuuure ;P
Zomburai edit delete reply
"That's what they all say!"

Violet Black (Guest) edit delete reply
@Ice the frosty cat
I think that's Alex who just picked up Beth...
...but it's probably still Chad's fault indirectly. Everything in the world is Chad's fault.
Frosty edit delete reply
Oh, so it is. The PSOs all look the same (except Karl) :c
Magravan edit delete reply
@Silver Streak - I'm glad to hear it, thank you :)

@Fortunado1972 - Not everyone... :)

@MatthewJA - Caps Lock is definitely intense :D

@Demus - June said "I get to draw another Beth bum shot!" So yes, very blatant :D

@vwyler - That is definitely one theory ;)

@Ice the frosty cat - Chad isn't in this one :)

@Zomburai - I don't think she believes him :)

@Violet Black - Well, Chad did rat them out, so indireectly, yes ;)
moizmad edit delete reply
I hear you re scene switches Mags, I mean, you can only use "meanwhile back at the ranch" so many times.
? (Guest) edit delete reply
i'm sensing a zombie war, and i'm just guessing he controls all fours because he doesn't really need to "direct control" every single 1 or 2, and it could be that he's human... we haven't seen an inherit 'brain sense' in any zombies, atleast fours, and personally i feel a zombie civil war brewing, i love it
Magravan edit delete reply
@moizmad - Yeah, this one and the next one switch scenes every panel, I think...

@? - A zombie civil war is almost guaranteed at this point ;D
jordanch68 (Guest) edit delete reply
Oh my damsel Zombie in distress! :)
bbedlam edit delete reply
hmm. Remote-controlled redheads? Where can I get me one of them? (ha ha.. don't tell my wife I said that).

That said, I don't think there should be any trouble understanding that these two stories were overlapping at the same time. One way to try to show this (if you do it in the future) would be to put the "Main story" (in this case the Phanton and Sylene, since Beth's story is shown as a 'reaction' to it) would be do the Sylene/Phantom aspect as a full page, with the Beth panels done as panel inserts into it. In other words, instead of using the white borders, you'd draw the artwork of the Phantom/Sylene backgrounds to form the whole page. Does that make sense? It's hard to describe what I'm trying to say...
Magravan edit delete reply
@Jordanch68 - What about Alexander? He has to carry her, she's getting a free ride!

@bbedlam - I can't promise I wont encourage her to read our comic where she might see it herself, but I promise not to tell her to look for it :D Or to insert a chip under her skin that allows her to be remotely controlled ;)

As for the scenes, the Beth / Alexander scenes aren't really a reaction to what's going on with Phantom / Sylene... It's more a case of showing several events all coming to a head at once ;) They are related by the fact that they are both addressing the control that Robert has over the society...
model S (Guest) edit delete reply
@Jordanch68 -pulls out a railgun- oh HELL no. beth is MINE. and if you touch her i will declare war on you. ... james will back me.

@comic: looks pretty clear cut to me. good work both of you -thumbs up- good work indeed.
Magravan edit delete reply
If you had a railgun, I might :) Otherwise you guys are on your own... King of the Hill style!
jordanch68 edit delete reply
@Magravan - Methinks they're both being taken for a ride in a certain sense! This comic is too awesome for words! Oh and I got my shirts today. Whoot! :)

@model S - I'll see your rail gun and raise you one modified space-time continuum, where rail guns are water pistols...so there! Go Beth! :) I think there's a reality show in there someplace, "Zombielette" winner gets Beth, the losers...well...looks like there'll be an influx of new Ones. :)

model S (Guest) edit delete reply
i reject your reality and substitute my own. where you sir are a one. therefore beth is my woman. MINE!!

on a side note: -hugs june for DAT ASS! (panel 4)
MatthewJA edit delete reply
Magravan edit delete reply
@Jordanch68 - Which shirts? If they are TOGM shirts, are you going to take a picture? :)

@model S - I don't think you really needed to specify the panel... It was pretty obvious :D

@MatthewJA - Co-produces, actually. CAPS LOCK wouldn't pony up the dough to be the sole producer. Damn CAPS LOCK.
model S (Guest) edit delete reply
i know i didn't. but i wanted to. because now people will count the panels to make sure i'm right.
jordanch68 edit delete reply
@model S- Well in my reality Beth and Sylene are lesbians and have no use for me...oh wait that reality sucks but the pics are awesome!

@Magravan- Yes the very same shirts and yes I will have to come up with some and post them! And wow these shirts are nice! :)